解放軍文職招聘考試12月四級(jí)作文名師改卷感悟及針對(duì)建議-解放軍文職人員招聘-軍隊(duì)文職考試-紅師教育

發(fā)布時(shí)間：2017-06-05 20:43:59回顧歷年12月四級(jí)作文名師改卷感悟及針對(duì)建議1.大家拿到作文題目之后，先要仔細(xì)閱讀題目明確作文的類型。這一點(diǎn)是非常關(guān)鍵的因?yàn)樗募?jí)相對(duì)很強(qiáng)調(diào)作文的結(jié)構(gòu)。如果沒有一個(gè)很清楚的結(jié)構(gòu)，一定會(huì)失去一定的分?jǐn)?shù)。四級(jí)作文一般有下面三種結(jié)構(gòu)：說(shuō)明文，議論文和應(yīng)用文寫作。說(shuō)明文主要可以分為闡述主題類型的，利弊類型的，原因結(jié)果類型的，解決問題類型的以及諺語(yǔ)說(shuō)明類型。議論文主要是就觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行反駁類型的。應(yīng)用文寫作主要包括演講詞，求職求學(xué)信，邀請(qǐng)信，感謝信和投訴信等。所以大家必須在平時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)的過程明確各種類型的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，這樣在考試時(shí)候就可以在結(jié)構(gòu)上不會(huì)出現(xiàn)任何問題，也不會(huì)因?yàn)閷懪茴}而失分。 來(lái)源：www.yeeyi.net5.卷面一定要整潔，字一定要寫的漂亮，這可以在很大程度上影響你們分?jǐn)?shù)的升降。印象分?jǐn)?shù)幾乎全部是這個(gè)決定的，所以大家也要主要平時(shí)handwriting的練習(xí)。四六級(jí)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及錯(cuò)誤總結(jié)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2分 條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分 基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。8分 基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。11分 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。14分 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好?；旧蠠o(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。(注:白卷,作文與題目毫不相關(guān),或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想,則給0分。)常見寫作錯(cuò)誤一、主語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤1.主語(yǔ)缺失1)Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry.2)Inmyhometownaren tverybusy.Peopleinmyhometownareverybusy.2.非名詞主語(yǔ)1)Richdoesn tensureahappylife.Beingrichdoesn tmeanahappylife./Wealthdoesn tensureahappylife.2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.Keepingtwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.3.主謂錯(cuò)位1)Readingbookscanacquireknowledge.Peoplecanacquireknowledgefrombooks.2)Nowpeople slivescan tleaveTV.Nowpeoplecan tdowithoutTV.二、謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤1.多重謂語(yǔ)1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.Inourmodernsociety,manyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated./Alargenumberofpeoplehavefallenvictimtovarioustricks.2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecan tstudyabroad.Povertymakesmanypeopleunabletostudyabroad./Povertymakesitimpossibleformanypeopletostudyabroad./Povertypreventsmanypeoplefromstudyingabroad./Manypeoplecan tstudyabroadbecauseofpoverty.2.非動(dòng)詞謂語(yǔ)1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit.Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersareagainstit.2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring.Itissaidthattheplaceisworthtouring.3.主謂不一致1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish.IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachesmeCollegeEnglish.2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata.Iuseadiskbecauseitholdsplentyofdata..4.誤用詞組1)Theyinsistonpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.Theyinsistthatpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.2)Iamafraidofthatit sgoingtorain.Iamafraidthatit sgoingtorain.三、冠詞錯(cuò)誤1)Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.Inmyopinion,thefutureofthebicycleisverypromising.2)Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlythegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadones.Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones.四、代詞錯(cuò)誤1.偷梁換柱1)Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize.Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,heshouldnotplagiarize.2)Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong./Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.2.指代不明1)Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved.Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting./Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved.2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear.五、形容詞、副詞錯(cuò)誤1)Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently.Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferent.2)Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.六、分詞誤用1)Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.2)Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewingthroughmycamera.Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewedthroughmycamera.七、修飾語(yǔ)誤置1)SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople.SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforpeoplelearningEnglish.2)Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovetothecountrysidethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.八、垂懸修飾語(yǔ)1)Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peoplehavegreatlyimprovedtheirlivingstandard.2)Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,theletterwaspostedatonce.Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,Ipostedtheletteratonce.九、平行錯(cuò)誤1)Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,thespeedoftrafficcanbeincreased.Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,wecanincreasethespeedoftraffic.2)BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyofthecourseandhowlongitlasted.BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyandlengthofthecourse./BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmehowdifficultthecoursewasandhowlongitlasted.十、搭配錯(cuò)誤1)Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.2)Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.Heavytrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.十一、破句1)Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob.Thenyoumustpassthejobinterview.Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob,youmustpassthejobinterview.2)Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners.Becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners,becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)寫作經(jīng)典句型1)主語(yǔ)從句It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known thatIt is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent thatIt goes without saying that It is universally acknowledged thatIt is / thatwww.yeeyi.NET2)賓(表)語(yǔ)從句We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3)定語(yǔ)從句(限定性和非限定性)As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table ,There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4)狀語(yǔ)從句(時(shí)間，原因，地點(diǎn)，條件，讓步，轉(zhuǎn)折等)When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster (怪物) which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5)分詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)Prof. Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6)倒裝句Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem. Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7)被動(dòng)句Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem. He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds. Many people believe that (It is believed that8)設(shè)問句Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?9)比較1.The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that... 5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else, it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However, the same is not applicable to B.10. A and B differ in several ways.11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.13. The same is true of B.14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...10)原因壹壹英語(yǔ)(www.YeeYi.Net)1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that...6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...8. One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...9. Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...10. Perhaps the primary factor is that ...11. But the fundamental cause is that ...11)結(jié)果1. It may give rise to a host of problems.2. The immediate result it produces is ...3. It will exercise a profound influence upon...4. Its consequence can be so great that...12)批駁1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6) It makes no sense to argue for ...7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...13)舉例1) A good case in point is ...2) As an illustration, we may take ...3) Such examples might be given easily.4) ...is often cited as an example.14)證明1) No one can deny the fact that ...2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...4) Recent studies indicate that ...5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...15)開篇1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...8) According to a recent survey, ...9) With the rapid development of ..., ...16)結(jié)尾1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...10) Taking all these into account, we ...11) Whether it is goodornot /positiveornegative, one thing is certain/clear...2009年6月英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)考試考前必看范文(一)一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicLongHolidays.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.長(zhǎng)假給大學(xué)生帶來(lái)的好處2.長(zhǎng)假可能給大學(xué)生帶來(lái)的問題3.我應(yīng)當(dāng)怎樣利用好長(zhǎng)假LongHolidaysGenerallyspeaking,longholidaysaregoodforuscollegestudents.Ontheonehand,wehavealotoftimetostudybyourselvesandthusimproveweaknessesandfurtherdevelopstrengths.Ontheotherhand,wecantakepart-timejobs,whichcanmakeusrealizeresponsibilityandmakeourselvesbetterpreparedforsociallife.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Somestudentsfailtomakegooduseoftheirtimeandtheyareaddictedtovariouscomputergames.Iamafraidthattheyarelikelytoruinthemselvesinthisway.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwilltrytomakethebestuseofmyprecioustime.IwillspendmostofmyholidaysstudyingEnglishforthatIamverypooratit.Inaddition,Iwilltakeapart-timejobasprivateteacher.Bythismeans,Icanearnsomemoneyandputmyknowledgeintopracticeaswell.二Directions:Forthispart，youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnaHarmoniousDormitoryLife.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese：1.宿舍生活有時(shí)會(huì)出現(xiàn)不和諧的情況2.一個(gè)和諧宿舍生活的必要性3.如何創(chuàng)造和諧的宿舍生活OnaHarmoniousDormitoryLifeDormitorylifeisanindispensablepartofcollegelife.Butsometimestheharmonyinthedormitorywillbedisturbedinonewayoranother.Asisknowntoall,aharmoniousdormitorylifeisimportanttocollegestudentsandbenefitsallthemembers.Ontheonehand,wecanhaveagoodrestandputourheartintostudy.Ontheotherhand,wewillhaveagoodmoodandenjoybeingtogether.Thereareseveralwaystocreateandmaintainaharmoniousdormitorylife.Firstly,youhavetoevaluateyourlifestyleandtrytogetridofyourdirtyhabits,ifthereareany.Secondly,whenanannoyingsituationarises,you lljusthavetolearntotolerateeachotherandco-exist.Thirdly,you llhavetosharewitheachotherandmakegoodfriends.Inconclusion,weshouldtryourbesttobuildaharmoniousdormitorylifeforthesakeofgoodstudyandgoodlife.三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSilenceIsNotAlwaysGold.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中， 沉默是金 不一定是好事2.請(qǐng)舉例說(shuō)明3.總結(jié)全文SilenceIsNotAlwaysGoldSilenceisgold isapopularsayinginwhichmanypeoplehavebelief.Tothesepeoplespeakingtoomuchisnotamerit.However,ifyoualwayskeepsilent,youwillprobablymissmanygoldenopportunitiesinsteadofobtainingthegoldofsilence.LastweekIreadanarticlewrittenbyanofficelady.Thecompanywheresheworkedhadtwokindsofoffices:cubicleofficeandwindowoffice.Asanewemployeesheworkedinacubicleofficetogetherwithtwentycolleagues.Twoyearslatershestillworkedtherebutsomecolleagueswhocamelaterthanherhadmovedintothewindowoffice.Shefeltconfused.Onedayonecolleaguetoldherthatwindowofficewasn tobtainedwithoutrequest.Butbelievingthatshecertainlygainedoneifshedidagoodjobthewomanhadneveraskedforit.Fromthewoman sexperiencewelearnthatsilenceisnotalwaysgold.Inthemodernsocietyoneneedstospeakhismindandspeakforhisowninterests.四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTryingtoRenewKnowledge.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese：1.更新知識(shí)的重要性2.怎樣更新知識(shí)3.你自己的感受TryingtoRenewKnowledgeToday ssocietyisofknowledgeeconomyage,inwhichnewknowledgeemergesmuchfasterthaneverbefore.Moreover,knowledgeplaysanimportantpartinthewholeeconomy.Therefore,everyonefindsitnecessarytorenewhis(orher)knowledge,otherwisehe(orher)willbeleftbehindthesociety.Therearesomewaystoupdateknowledge.Ontheonehand,onecanattenddifferentcoursesatalltypesofschools,eitherpart-timeorfull-time.Ontheotherhand,self-studyis,inasense,amoreconvenientandpracticalmethodbywhichonecaneffectivelyrenewhis(orher)knowledge.Inmyview,Ihaveprimarilydependedonself-taughtmethodintherecentyears.AlthoughIambusydoingdailywork,Istillinsistonteachingmyselfatnight.Inthisway,Icannotonlykeepupwiththeswiftdevelopmentofsocietybutalsoapplynewknowledgetomypracticalwork,whichbenefitsmealot.五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWesternFastFood.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.洋快餐頗受中國(guó)消費(fèi)者的青睞2.產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因3.我的看法WesternFastFoodFastfoodisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinChina,especiallyamongchildrenandteenagers.Today,nothingismorerepresentativeofthefastpaceofmodernsocietythanfastfood.Thereareseveralreasonsforitspopularity.Foronething,itisfastandconvenient.Gointoafastfoodrestaurant,andyourfoodwillbereadyinaminute.Precioustimewon tbewastedinwaiting-in-linetoorderorwaitingatyourtableforyourfoodtoarrive.Foranother,itspopularityisalsoattributedtothecleanfood,theexcellentserviceandthecomfortableenvironmentofthefastfoodrestaurants,andAmericanstyle.However,Ithinkthatfastfoodisn thealthyenoughbecauseitdoesn tcomposeabalanceddietandislowinnutrition.Fastfoodisonlyagoodchoicewhenyouareinahurryandweshouldturntoitonlyonceinawhile.六、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSocialPractice.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.大學(xué)生越來(lái)越重視參與社會(huì)實(shí)踐2.社會(huì)實(shí)踐對(duì)大學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)和生活的影響3.如何正確看待社會(huì)實(shí)踐 我要收藏SocialPracticeSocialpracticeisabridgebetweentheirtheoryandreality.So,inrecentyears,moreandmorecollegestudentschoosetotakepart-timejobsinoroutsideschool.Inthesocialpractice,studentsaresuretolearnmorethantheirtextbooks.Theirparticipationinsocialpracticemightstrengthentheirsenseofsocialresponsibility.Theirclosecontactwiththeworkingpeoplemighthelpthemtoapplytheirknowledgetothesolutiontothepracticalproblem.Butmanyteacherscomplainthattherearefewerandfewerstudentswhopayattentiontotheirstudy.Inmyview,it sanundeniedfactthatstudentsbreakthebalancebetweentheirjobsandstudies,especiallywhentheyfallintoconflict.ButIthinkstudentsshouldspendtheirsparetimetakingpart-timejobs.Timelyparticipationinsocialpracticewillbenefitthemallthroughtheirlife.七、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.心理健康問題往往是導(dǎo)致疾病的原因2.分析人們產(chǎn)生心理健康問題的原因(可從失業(yè)、壓力過重、缺少支持、缺乏人際交往能力等方面加以分析)3.你認(rèn)為人們應(yīng)如何保持心理健康HowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?Oneinfourpeoplewillexperiencesomekindofmentalhealthprobleminthecourseofayear.Whenyoufailtomanagetheseproblems,theyarelikelytocausevariousmentalillnesses.Thecausesofmentalhealthproblemsoftenvaryalotfromonecasetoanother.Intoday ssociety,agoodnumberofpeoplearesufferingfromheavypressure.Otherslackcommunicationskills.Inaddition,alotofpeopleareignorantofpsychologicalknowledgeabouthowtokeepmentallyfit.Therearealotofwaystocurbmentalhealthproblemsandkeeppsychologicallyhealthy.Firstly,findtherealcauseofyourmentalhealthproblemandseewhetheryoucandosomethingtomakeachange.Secondly,learntorelaxyourselfandtakeexercisetoreleasethepressure.Lastly,youmayfindithelpfultotalktoyourpartnerorfriendaboutyourproblem,orseeksupportandadvicefromapsychologicalconsultant.八、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAidEducationinChina.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:AidEducationinChina1.支教的現(xiàn)象2.支教的意義3.你的觀點(diǎn)AidEducationinChinaTherehasbeenahottopicrecentlyaboutcollegestudents beingencouragedtohelpchildreninthepoorandremoteareas.Generallyaid-educationishelpfulintwoaspects.Firstofall,itcanbroadenvolunteers horizonsinpoverty-strickenregions.Forinstance,itisagoldenopportunityforvolunteerstoexperienceacompletelydifferentlife.Inaddition,collegestudentshavetoadaptthemselvestotheharshlivingconditions,meanwhiletheycanmakefriendswiththechildren.Inmyview,thefutureofChina seducationdependsonthejointeffortsofthesociety,thegovernmentandallthecitizens.Tosumup,wecollegestudentsshouldtaketheinitiativeinresponsetotheappealforsupplyinghelptochildreninpoorregions.九、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSelectingCourses.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.選修課程在大學(xué)很普遍2.解釋其中的原因3.你的看法SelectingCoursesRecently,peopleingrowingnumbersshowtheirconcernaboutselectingcourses.Insomecolleges,studentsarepermittedtopickouttheircourse sprofessorsfreely.Thereasonsarelistedasfollows:Inthefirstplace,studentscanchoosetheteacheraccordingtotheirinterests,whichwillbehelpfulfortheirfuturecareers.Besides,selectingcoursescanreducetherateofstudents absenceindirectlyforstudentsusuallychoosetheirfavoriteteachers.AsfarasIamconcerned,everycoinhastwosides.Ontheonehand,studentsmaylearnthecoursebetter,becausetheymaychoosetheprofessortheyliked.Ontheotherhand,iftheprofessorwhoisverypopularandagreatnumberofstudentswouldliketoattendhis/hercourse,theclassroommustbeovercrowded.Itwillhaveabadimpactontheclass.十、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealetter.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:假設(shè)你是Tony，是英語(yǔ)一班二年級(jí)學(xué)生，因有事不能上外教Ms.Riddle的課，給她寫一張請(qǐng)假條，說(shuō)明你不能來(lái)上課的原因。October8,2007DearMs.Riddle,IwouldliketoknowifIcouldaskforacasualleaveofabsencefromyourOralEnglishclassthisThursdaymorning.YesterdayafternoonIgotaphonecallfrommycousin,whoisnowoperatingasmallcompanyinsuburbsofthiscity.Heneedsaninterpreterfortwodaysbutcannotfindthemosttrustworthyperson,sohewantsmetomakeanattempt.ItseemstomethatthisisagoldenopportunitytoputwhatIhavelearnedinyourclassintopractice,butIneedyourpermissionofabsence.IfyouthinkImaygoandhelphimovercomethedifficulty,IamconfidentthatI lldoagoodjobandbothofuswillbethankful.Earnestlyyours,Tony2009年6月英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)考試考前必看范文(三)一、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicIntelligence-NatureorNurture?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有人認(rèn)為智力是天生的我要收藏2.也有人認(rèn)為智力是環(huán)境決定的3.如何更好地發(fā)展智力Intelligence-NatureorNurture?Nowadays,thereisnoagreementamongpeopleconcerningintelligence.Somepeoplecontendthatintelligenceistosomeextentsomethingwearebornwith.Andthecloserthebloodrelationshipbetweentwopeople,theclosertheyarelikelytobeinintelligence.However,othersmaintainthatenvironmentplaysacrucialroleinourintelligence.Forinstance,ifweputtwoidenticaltwinsindifferentenvironments,wemightsendonetouniversityandtheothertoafactorywherethejobisboring,wewouldfinddifferencesintheirintelligenceseveralyearslater.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,ourintelligenceispartlybornandpartlydeveloped.Thesurewaytodevelopourintelligenceisintelligentparentsaswellasagoodenvironment.二、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicParentsAretheBestTeachers.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.父母是最好的老師2.解釋其中的原因3.重申觀點(diǎn)ParentsAretheBestTeachersItisyourparentswhoteachyoutowalk;itisyourparentswhoteachyoutospeak;itisyourparentswhoteachyoutodothesebasicthingsinyourlife.Thusparentsshouldbethebestteachers!Firstofall,parentsknowusmorethanothersdo.Parentsgiveuslife,andIconsiderthatwewillspendplentyoftimewiththem.Therefore,theylearnaboutourmeritandshortcomingsclearly.Atthesametime,theywillhelpustoshakeoffourdemerit.Besides,parentsownmuchmorelifeexperiencethanus.Sometimes,theyarejustlikeourmodels.Andasthesayinggoes: Exampleisbetterthanprecept. Thuswewillunconsciouslyimitatesomeofourparents habitsandstylesofbehavior,whichmeansthatwecanlearngoodthingsfromthem.Justasthesayinggoes: Thereisnoplacelikehome. AndIthinkthereisnoteacherlikeourparents.Theyarethebestteachersinourlife.三、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAShoppingCenterintheNeighborhood.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:據(jù)稱，在你所在社區(qū)內(nèi)將建一個(gè)大型購(gòu)物中心。你同意還是反對(duì)這個(gè)計(jì)劃?為什么?請(qǐng)說(shuō)出具體的理由。AShoppingCenterintheNeighborhoodAlthoughlargeshoppingcentersareveryconvenientandgoodplacestospendfreetime,theycanalsobringsomedisadvantages,andforthisreasonIwoulddisagreewiththebuildingofoneinmyneighborhood.Firstofall,onedisadvantageofhavingalargeshoppingcenterwouldbeagreatincreaseintraffic.Morecarswouldnotonlybringtrafficjamsbutalsonoiseandparkingproblems.Second,alargeshoppingcenterrequiresalotofspace.Tobuildone,someopenspacewouldhavetobesacrificed.Wemightnolongerhaveroomforasportsground.Justbecauseoftheabovedisadvantages,Iwouldopposeanyplantoconstructalargeshoppingcenterinmyneighborhood.Althoughitisnecessaryformetovisitshoppingcentersonoccasion,Icouldspendsometimetravelingtoanotheronenotfaraway.MyneighborhoodisapeacefulandquietplaceandIhopeitwillstaythatway.2009年6月英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)考試考前必看范文(三)四、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoArrangeYourTimeatCollege?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:對(duì)大學(xué)生的時(shí)間安排有兩種不同的看法：有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)生就該整天讀書;有人認(rèn)為參加體育鍛煉是大學(xué)生生活的一部分?你的看法?總結(jié)全文HowtoArrangeYourTimeatCollege?Nowadays,peoplearedividedonthequestionhowstudentsshouldarrangetheirschooldays.Somepeopleclaimstudentsshouldspendthewholeschooldaysinacademicstudies.However,otherscontendphysicalexerciseshouldbearequiredpartofeveryschoolday.Asforme,Iwillchoosethelatterwithouthesitation.Beingastudent,hisorhermaintaskistoworkhardonhisorheracademicstudy.Onlybystudyinghardcanheorsheobtainadequateknowledgefromacademicstudies.Nevertheless,Idon tthinkastudentshouldfocusonstudyingtoomuch,heorsheshouldjoininothermeaningfulactivities.Forinstance,doingphysicalexerciseisagoodwaytomakestudents lifemorecolorfulandbeneficial.Inaword,whenstudentsgainknowledgefromacademicstudies,theyshouldnotneglecttorelaxthemselvesandtakeregularphysicalexercise.五、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicDoLibrariesBecomeUselessattheAgeofInformation?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有些人認(rèn)為信息時(shí)代不再需要傳統(tǒng)圖書館了，因?yàn)?.有些人認(rèn)為信息時(shí)代傳統(tǒng)圖書館仍然有重要作用，因?yàn)?.你的看法DoLibrariesBecomeUselessattheAgeofInformation?Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutlibrariesattheageofinformationamongpeople.Somepeople,especiallytheyoungergeneration,challengethevalueofconventionallibraries.Whentheyneedanyinformationintheirstudiesorwork,theycanturntotheircomputersforhelp.Forthisreason,theydonotneedtogotoalibraryforborrowingorreturningoneortwobooks.Whileothers,includingmostoldpeopleaswellasscholars,valuelibraries.Theylovelibrariesbecausetheycanenjoypeaceandquietnessinanisolatedspiritualworld.Andtheyalsohaveaccesstorareacademicworksneededfortheirstudiesinthelibraries.Inmyview,conventionallibrariesarestillavailablethoughthereisstillmuchroomforimproving.AttheAgeofInformation,aslongasknowledgeisrespectedandcherished,librarieswon textinctfromourlives.Ontheotherhand,librariesshouldnotrefusethelatestinformationtechnology,whichwillenablethemtoregainthoseyoungreaders.2009年6月英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)考試考前必看范文(四)一、Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledCellPhones.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbasedonthefollowinggraghandtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.描述上圖所示的手機(jī)用戶變化情況(據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)，2007年上半年手機(jī)用戶量超過5億)2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3.對(duì)此現(xiàn)象做出評(píng)價(jià)CellPhonesAsisshowninthechart,cellphonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithinChina.In1999,thenumberofcellphonesinusewasonly24,480,000,butin2002,thenumberismorethan100million,whichisaturningpoint.Theneweststatisticshowsthatin2007thenumberhasexceeded500million.Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisdevelopment.Firstly,acellphonehasnowiresandcanbecarriedeverywhereeasily.Secondly,acellphoneissomethingwonderfulthatwecanhavefunwithnews,games,musicandchatthroughsendingshortmessages.Thirdly,thedropinpriceandthesimultaneousimprovementinthefunctionshavemadeitpossibleforanaveragepersontomakeuseofacellphone.?Thewideuseofcellphoneshasmadethemmoreandmoreindispensableinpeople sdailylife.Themanyfunctionsofthecellphonehavemadecertainpeoplereluctanttoseparatethemselvesfromtheircellphone.一、Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledCellPhones.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbasedonthefollowinggraghandtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.描述上圖所示的手機(jī)用戶變化情況(據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)，2007年上半年手機(jī)用戶量超過5億)2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3.對(duì)此現(xiàn)象做出評(píng)價(jià)CellPhonesAsisshowninthechart,cellphonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithinChina.In1999,thenumberofcellphonesinusewasonly24,480,000,butin2002,thenumberismorethan100million,whichisaturningpoint.Theneweststatisticshowsthatin2007thenumberhasexceeded500million.Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisdevelopment.Firstly,acellphonehasnowiresandcanbecarriedeverywhereeasily.Secondly,acellphoneissomethingwonderfulthatwecanhavefunwithnews,games,musicandchatthroughsendingshortmessages.Thirdly,thedropinpriceandthesimultaneousimprovementinthefunctionshavemadeitpossibleforanaveragepersontomakeuseofacellphone.?Thewideuseofcellphoneshasmadethemmoreandmoreindispensableinpeople sdailylife.Themanyfunctionsofthecellphonehavemadecertainpeoplereluctanttoseparatethemselvesfromtheircellphone.三、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoDealwithSub-health?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.隨著現(xiàn)代化的不斷加速發(fā)展，全世界的物質(zhì)生活水平不斷攀升，但人們卻日益受到 亞健康 這種不良狀態(tài)的威脅2.亞健康的具體表現(xiàn)及在我國(guó)的蔓延程度(據(jù)調(diào)查，北京75%、上海72%、廣州70%的上班族都處于亞健康狀態(tài))3.在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中應(yīng)怎樣解決亞健康問題HowtoDealwithSub-healthWiththemodernizationoftheworld,people sstandardoflivinghasimprovedalot.Thenthereappearsastateofsub-healthamongpeoplewhichposesanewthreattothem.Therearesometypicalsymptomsforpeoplewhoareinastateofsub-health.Firstofall,thosewhosufferfromitoftenhaveaheadacheorbackache.Secondly,theyfeellikehavingarestfrequently.Whatupsetsusmostisthat,thesituationisspreadingcountrywide.Asaresult,moreandmoreworkersinbigcitiesareharassedbyit,withapercentageof75inBeijing,72inShanghaiand70inGuangzhourespectively.Thenhowcanwesolvethisproblemeffectively?Expertssuggestthatthebestwaytokeepourselveshealthyistodoexercises.Itisalsoveryimportantthatpeopleshouldformagoodlivinghabit,forexample,gettingupearlyandgoingtosleepearly.Onlydoingsocanwekeepushealthy.四、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAJob-searchingExperience.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.介紹得到這次求職信息的途徑2.敘述這次求職經(jīng)歷的全過程3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)這次經(jīng)歷的感受或體會(huì)AJob-searchingExperienceLastFridaymyEnglishteachertoldmethatoneofherfriendswaslookingforanEnglishgoverness.Iaskedforherfriend snameandphonenumber.Ideterminedtoseizethechanceandhavemyfirstjob.IwasalittlenervouswhenIwenttothewoman shouse.IwastoldthatthetalkbetweenusthatdaywoulddecidewhetherIcouldtakethejob.However,whenthewoman,Lucyasshewascalled,welcomedmeintoherhouse,Ifeltmuchrelaxed.IthoughtaslongasIwassincereandfriendlyIwouldperformwell.Theconversationwentonsmoothly.SheseemedmuchmoreinterestedinmyhabitsandhobbiesthanhowgoodIwasatEnglish.Ithappenedthatwehavethesamehobby:playingtennis.Itoldheraboutmyfamilyandschoollife.ObviouslyIsucceededandfromthenonIwenttoteachherEnglisheveryweekend.Lucytoldmelaterthatitwasmysinceritythatmadeherwillinglyacceptme.Itistruethatwecanplaysometrickswhileseekingforajob,butremembertobesincere.It sthesecretofmysuccess.五、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitledMyOpiniononCampusLove.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有人認(rèn)為校園戀愛的影響不好2.有人卻認(rèn)為校園戀愛沒有什么不好3.你的觀點(diǎn)MyOpiniononCampusLoveOncampus,loverscanbefoundhereandthere.Somepeoplethinktoomuchintimacyhasabadinfluence.Ittakesloverstoomuchtimeandenergy.Furthermore,theirintimacycandistracttheirownaswellasotherstudents attentionfromstudy.Campusshouldbeaplaceforstudyandshouldmaintainanatmosphereoflearning.Ontheotherhand,otherpeoplebelieveitisOK.Pursuingloveisallrighttostudentsoncampusandintimacyisanaturalexpressionoflove.Somescholarsoflawholdthatfriendshipandappropriateintimacyareanimportantpartofstudentdevelopment.Inmyopinion,whatallpeopleshoulddoisjustleaveitasitis.Universitystudentsareadults,andtheycanhandletheirownaffairswellenough.However,theyhavetoadmitthatschoolisaplacewherepeoplereceiveaneducationandtheirmaintaskistostudy.Therefore,studentsareexpectedtobehavethemselvesinproperways.2009年6月英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)考試考前必看范文(五)一、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicDoWeNeed Nevergiveup ?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1. 永不言棄 一直被認(rèn)為是一種積極的生活態(tài)度，是個(gè)人成功的關(guān)鍵因素2.但是，也有人認(rèn)為適當(dāng)?shù)姆艞壊攀敲髦堑倪x擇3.你對(duì)此的看法及理由DoWeNeed Nevergiveup ?Itiswidelyacceptedthat Nevergiveup ,astrongandpositivelifeattitude,isthekeyforindividualsuccessonthegroundsthatpermanentpersistencemayboostourconfidence,strengthenourwill,andprovideusasecondchanceforsuccesswhenweareinhardship.However,othersarguethatsensibleabandonmentismorepreciousthanblindpersistencebecausethewiseoneshouldchoosethemostsuitableareaforhimself/herself.Inmyopinion,weneedtolearntogiveuptimely.Themostimmediatereasonisthatweshouldadjustouraimcarefullyinordertogoaheadcontinuously.Sometimes,togiveupthoseunrealistictargetsisessentialforsuccess.Besides,theattitude Nevergiveup exhaustsusbothmentallyandphysically.Onlythroughlearningtogiveupcanweleadapleasantandrelaxinglife.Finally,thetemporarycomprisemeansanewstart,abeginningbringingnewhopes,expectationsandopportunitiesforus.Passiveasgivingupsoundsalike,itrepresentsamorematureandrealisticmentality.Ifthoseopposingthisattitudecantakeintoconsiderationofitsbenefits,thenthismayseemacceptableinourlives.二、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoSolvetheHousingProbleminBigCities?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.住房問題在大城市變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)峻2.住房問題產(chǎn)生原因及給城市帶來(lái)的影響3.建議一個(gè)解決辦法(如：多造高層建筑;向地下發(fā)展;建造衛(wèi)星城市;疏散城市人口等)HowtoSolvetheHousingProbleminBigCities?Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleareflowingintobigcities.Accordingly,thehousingprobleminbigcitiesisbecomingmuchmoreserious.Peopleinthebigcityarecomplaininghousingshortageandroaringpriceofthehousing.Asweknow,thetemptationandopportunitiesprovidedbybigcitiesattractpeoplewhowanttomakeafortuneinbigcities,whichisthemajorcauseofhousingprobleminbigcities.Besides,housevacancyandspeculatinginthehousingmarketarebecomingthetoughproblem.Wecan tdenythehousingproblemhasbroughtaboutgreatpressuretothelow-incomefamilies.Meanwhile,solvingthisproblemwillaffectthepublic sconfidenceonthegovernment.Tosolvethisproblem,Ithinkbuildingsatellitecitiesinthesuburbsismorepractical.Thefreshairandbeautifulsceneryinthesuburbswillpullmanypeoplefromtheovercrowdedcityandalleviatethepressureofhousing.三、Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:目前假文憑現(xiàn)象屢見不鮮這種現(xiàn)象造成的危害我們應(yīng)該怎么做HowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas?Therehasbeenaseriousepidemicoffakediplomasinsomebigcitiesrecently.UsuallyacertificateofBachelor sDegreecostsabout200yuan,whichisreallycheapcomparedwiththe4yearsofhardworkandtheprettybigsumoffeesinvolvedinnormalwaysofgettingthediploma.Thevictimsoffakediplomasarefirstofallemployers,whopayhighsalariesbutdonotgetrealtalents.Peoplewhohavegenuinediplomasarealsohurtgreatly.Theyhavehonestlyspent4orevenmoreyearsandgreatenergyworkinghardinschools,butcannotgetanyadvantageinjobhunting.Tocombattheepidemic,practicalabilityandindividualpersonalityshouldberecognizedasimportantfactorsofexcellentjobperformance.Besides,effectivemeasuressupportedbyadvancedITtechnologyshouldbeintroducedandtakentohelpemployersdistinguishgenuinediplomasfromfakeones.四、談?wù)勀銓?duì)選秀節(jié)目的看法OnTVShow時(shí)下電視選秀節(jié)目非常流行有人認(rèn)為選秀很好，能給普通人展示自己的機(jī)會(huì)我的觀點(diǎn)OnTVShowTVhasbeenonemediumofcommunicationthathasconnectedmillions.Anditisthislinkthatmakestalenthuntshowsonthetubeamazinglyinfluential.Youngfacesconveyingdisappointmentorevenoverwhelmingjoyhavebecomeacommonsightonasmanychannelsasyourremoteallowsyoutosurf.SomepeoplehavetheiropinionsontheTVshows.Theadvantagesoftheshowsarecleartosomepeople.Foronething,intermsofbusiness,theincreasingpopularityoftalentshowshashelpedthechannelsingeneratinghugeincomebywayofadvertisingandpromotions.Foranotherthing,theTVshowscanmakethecommonpeoplehaveopportunitytoshowthemselves.Personally,Isidewiththeformeropinion.Itisawonderfulfeelingandagreatwaytorelaxformetowatchtalentshowsandseeordinarypeoplelikemyselfbecomefamousandwincashprizes.Aslongastalentshowsareentertainingandinspiringus,thereisgreatsenseinkeepingandencouragingthem.五、ALetterofAdvice假設(shè)你是一名大四學(xué)生，即將畢業(yè)離校，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)四年的大學(xué)生活的經(jīng)歷給大一新生寫一封忠告信：1.作簡(jiǎn)單介紹2.大一新生如何適應(yīng)大學(xué)生活3.強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的重要性ALetterofAdviceDearFreshmen,I,theundersigned,amaseniorintheComputerScienceDepartmentofPekingUniversity.Iwouldliketosayafewwordstoyou,whichIhopewouldbehelpfultoyou.Tobeginwith,thechangeofideasisofmostimportanceforfreshmentoadaptthemselvestocampuslife.Duringthemiddleschooldays,weusuallydependuponourteachersatschoolandparentsathome.However,thelifeandstudyonuniversitycampusfeaturesindependence,whichisessentialtoourpsychologicaldevelopment.Inmyview,wehadbetteralwaysbearinmindtheideaofindependence.What smore,Englishlearningisamust.Ononehand,withoutCET4certificate,wecannotgetourdegreewhenwegraduatefromuniversity.Ontheotherhand,whenwehuntforjob,Englishlevelisadecidingfactor.Therefore,IdohopethatallofyouwillhaveagoodunderstandingofthenecessityoflearningEnglishwell.GoodLucktoyou!SincerelyYoursLiMing2009年6月英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)考試考前必看范文(六)一、InternetHarmony1.隨著社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個(gè)人必不可少的獲取信息的工具2.但是，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不和諧的因素，如垃圾信息，黃色網(wǎng)站，虛假新聞，網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等 壹壹英語(yǔ)考試www.yeeYi.net3.如何采取措施制止和消除這些現(xiàn)象InternetHarmonyTheadventoftheInternetusheredinaneweraofinterpersonalcommunicationsandbusinessoperations.Undoubtedly,theNetarerevolutionizingthedailylivesofthepeoplewhohaveanaccesstoit.TheprimaryreasonbehindtheInternetboomrootsinitsmultifunction.ArangeofproblemslurkingbehindthefrenzyofInternetimpressivelystandout.AvastmajorityofInternetusers mailboxesaresaturatedwithjunkmails,anissuewhichsparksstrongcriticismandgeneratesthelossofcorporateproductivity.Pornwebsiteslureagrowingnumberofyoungpeople svisits.Falsenewsviathee-mail,BBSandchatroomincreasinglyposesathreattothesocialprosperityandstability.Tocrackdownthem,weshouldpushforamoreeffectivelytoughlaw.Weshouldjoinourforcestolaunchanation-widecampaign,includingimposingstiffpenaltiesonspammers,shuttingdownorblockingthelewdsitesandintroducingareal-nameregistrationsystemtocurbfraudulentmessages.Wecanfullybelievethatourcombinedeffortswillreaprewards.Acleancyberspacewillpaintourlivesmorecolorfully.二、Livingon-campusoroff-campus?1.分別闡述住校的好處和在外租房的好處2.你對(duì)在校住和在外租房的看法Livingon-campusoroff-campus?Livingon-campusmakesiteasiertogetorientedtothewaythingsaredone.Plus,youinteractmorewithotherstudents.Keepingupwithstudiesinyourfirstyearishardenough.Youshouldnothavetoworryaboutfindingyourwayaroundandfiguringouttheuniversitybureaucracy.Livinginthedormitoryalsomakeastudentfeelmoreapartoftheuniversitycommunity.Therearemoreopportunitiesforyoutoinvolveinuniversityactivitiesandnetworkingwithstudentsanduniversityadministration.Livingoff-campus,however,isadefiniteadvantageforolderstudents.Findinganapartment,dealingwithleasesandthelandlord sregulations,cookingmeals,andfiguringoutbudgetsareallgoodpracticeforlifeaftergraduation.Off-campushousingalsogivesstudentsabetterperspectiveonwhatisgoingonaroundthem.Campuscanbelikelittleworlds.Gettingtoknowneighborswhoarenotstudentsisgoodforstudentscomingfromdifferenceplaces.Ithinkitisbetterforcollegestudentstoliveoncampusduringtheirfirsttwoyears,andthenmoveintoanapartmentforoff-campuslife,whilejuniorsandseniorsneedtheindependenceofoff-campuslife.三、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononGreenOlympics，Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothesuggestionsgivenbellowinChinese;1.現(xiàn)在社會(huì)上有很多環(huán)境污染和精神污染的現(xiàn)象，提出你對(duì) 綠色奧運(yùn) 的看法。2.為什么要提倡 綠色奧運(yùn) 。3.提倡綠色奧運(yùn)，從自己做起。GreenOlympicsOlympicGames,asweallknow,isahistoricsportsmeeting. GreenOlympics ,isoneofthethreethemesofBeijing2008OlympicGames.Atpresent,people slifeisbeingfloodedwithexhaustgasfromautomobile,bluefilm,wastewaterandsoon.Owingtothesephenomena,weshouldadvocate GreenOlympics ,andIampositiveofthispoint.Twopossiblereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,environmentalprotectionbenefitspeople shealth.Intermsofincreasingnumberoftrashesaroundus,suchaswhiteplasticbags,one-offcupsandchopsticks,itissensibleofdisposingofthemreasonably.Soweoughttousecleantechnology,renewableandrecyclablematerials.Secondly,environmentalprotectioniscrucialtoourcountry,andeventotheworld.LotsofcountriesattachedmoreattentiontoembracetheOlympicspirits higher,faster,andstronger .Inconclusion,ascollegestudentsandtheyounggeneration,weshouldtryourbesttoadvocate GreenOlympics .The2008OlympicGameswillbeagreenanduniqueOlympics.四、Shouldgradstudentbepaidhigherthannon-grads?1.大學(xué)生目前存在錯(cuò)誤心理 大學(xué)生應(yīng)比非大學(xué)生掙錢多給出大學(xué)生會(huì)有這種錯(cuò)誤的心理的原因從非大學(xué)生的發(fā)展?fàn)顩r來(lái)批判大學(xué)生這種錯(cuò)誤的心理Shouldgradstudentsbepaidhigherthannon-grads?Inourcountry,itisobviousnowthattheuniversitygraduatesearnmoremoneythannon-graduates.Iquiteagreewiththosegraduateswhohavepaidalotfortheirstudiesandexpecttomakemoreforeitherhimselforhisfamily.However,itisnotsooptimisticallyforthosewhohopetomakeit.Thecriticalcareercompetitionmakesthemfrustratedduetomanyfactorsinvolved.Oneoftheutmostfactorsisthattheyfeelwhattheyanticipateisnotmatchingupwithwhattheyhavefoundinreality.Manyuniversitygraduatesarenotsatisfiedwithwhattheygetforwhattheyhavedone.Asamatteroffact,someofthemexpectsounrealisticthattheyimmediatelylosethecredittotheworkforcetheybelongto.Onthecontrary,someofthenon-gradswhoaremorerealisticincareerhuntingtendtogetmoresatisfiedjobcomparedwithgraduates.Thuswhatreallymattershereinsalarybalanceishowonecancontributetotheorganizationratherthanwhatbackgroundtheyhold.ThetuitionisreallyhighinChina.Manyhighqualitystudentsduetothishavelosttheiracademicpursuit.Anyresponsiblegovernmentshouldinevitablytakethisburdenandputmoremoneyinordertobringupbetternextgenerationforthenation.五、Students RatingofTheirTeachers學(xué)生給老師打分已很普遍人們對(duì)其持不同態(tài)度我的看法Students RatingofTheirTeachersNowadays,ithasbecomeascommonincollegesanduniversitiesforstudentstogradeteachersasforteacherstogradestudents.Insomeuniversitiesstudents ratinghasevenbecometheonlysourceofinformationonteachingeffectiveness.This,however,hascausedgreatcontroversy.Someareinfavoroftheratingsystem.Theyholdthatsincestudentsattendtheteachers classeseveryday,theyshouldhavetheiropinionabouttheirteachers effectiveness.Others,onthecontrary,arestronglyagainstit.Theybelievethatthereismuchmoretoteachingthanwhatisshownonstudents ratingforms.Studentsshouldnotbeexpectedtojudgewhetherthematerialsusedareuptodateorhowwelltheteacherknowsaboutthesubject.Thesejudgmentsrequireprofessionalknowledge,whichisbestleftfortheteachers colleagues.Ithinkstudents ratingoftheirteachersisnecessary,butitshouldbeconductedinawaythatcanreallyshedmeaningfullightonteachers performance.Insteadofratingtheteachers knowledgeonthesubject,studentsshouldbeaskedtoestimatewhattheythemselveshaveleanedinacourse,andtoreportonsuchthingsasateacher sabilitytocommunicatewithstudents,hisrelationshipwithstudents,andhisabilitytoarouseinterestinthesubject.

2014年軍隊(duì)文職考試考試崗位能力:言語(yǔ)備考四忌

軍隊(duì)文職考試考試的臨近，許多考生開始積極主動(dòng)地備戰(zhàn)、應(yīng)試。紅師教育在軍隊(duì)文職招聘培訓(xùn)中許多已經(jīng)報(bào)名參加培訓(xùn)的考生反應(yīng)在實(shí)際的復(fù)習(xí)中，不知道如何去復(fù)習(xí)言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)模塊，或是經(jīng)過很長(zhǎng)一段時(shí)間的復(fù)習(xí)之后，對(duì)于言語(yǔ)模塊仍不能做到很好的把握，做題的錯(cuò)誤率仍然很高或者是成績(jī)不穩(wěn)定等問題或現(xiàn)象。對(duì)于以上的問題，除了必要的鼓勵(lì)之外，掌握一些復(fù)習(xí)中的具體方法，明確復(fù)習(xí)考試中的誤區(qū)是至關(guān)重要的。 一忌：盲目做題 與其他模塊不同，言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)模塊的重點(diǎn)在于要打牢基礎(chǔ)。而這不是單純的考高強(qiáng)度的、大量的做題能夠解決的，也即單純的題海戰(zhàn)術(shù)不能解決實(shí)際問題。重要的是培養(yǎng)日常的言語(yǔ)素質(zhì)。但是實(shí)際準(zhǔn)備中許多考生會(huì)說(shuō)，語(yǔ)文我們從小就學(xué)習(xí)，用不著復(fù)習(xí)，也有的會(huì)說(shuō)從小語(yǔ)文學(xué)習(xí)就不好，一看言語(yǔ)就頭疼。

通過大量的研究和總結(jié)我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，在言語(yǔ)模塊中，一些迷惑選項(xiàng)的設(shè)置往往與此相關(guān)，尤其是在邏輯填空部分。這樣一來(lái)，我們?cè)趯?shí)際做題中，準(zhǔn)確率肯定不高。而后者則是把簡(jiǎn)單問題復(fù)雜化了，總體而言，言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)考察的知識(shí)點(diǎn)都是我們?nèi)粘５恼Z(yǔ)言知識(shí)的積累。因此，簡(jiǎn)單來(lái)講，但凡通過高考的考生都可以順利的做言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)題的過程中應(yīng)該都是比較順利的。比如：言語(yǔ)理解的邏輯填空部分就是我們高考復(fù)習(xí)時(shí)易錯(cuò)詞的總結(jié)，大家不妨去翻看一下高考時(shí)的復(fù)習(xí)資料，肯定會(huì)有這些近義詞的總結(jié)。或是大家有意識(shí)的去網(wǎng)絡(luò)搜集一些資料，把自己在近義成語(yǔ)方面的知識(shí)盲區(qū)惡補(bǔ)一下，這絕對(duì)比題海戰(zhàn)術(shù)事半功倍。因此，做題只是一部分，我們通常所說(shuō)的做題，不是簡(jiǎn)單的為做而做，在做題的過程中要注意總結(jié)方法。

二忌：審題不明 這種錯(cuò)誤往往多發(fā)生在初次考試的考生身上，或是沒有學(xué)習(xí)過紅師課程的考生身上。沒上過課程而平時(shí)語(yǔ)文基礎(chǔ)很扎實(shí)的考生往往出錯(cuò)率很高的原因是因?yàn)?，他們沒有審清題目要求。我們知道尤其是片段閱讀題，我們針對(duì)其考察點(diǎn)的不同而對(duì)題目進(jìn)行了分類，再針對(duì)其考察點(diǎn)進(jìn)行了相應(yīng)的方法梳理。在言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)模塊中，有的題目考察我們的歸納概括能力，有的題目考查我們判斷分析能力，還有的題目是綜合考察我們的理解與判斷能力。軍隊(duì)文職考試考試是目前對(duì)考生綜合能力考察相對(duì)最為全面的一種考試形式，這也是言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)題型多樣性的一個(gè)原因。那么，在做題的過程中，我們只有明確題目具體能力考察的側(cè)重點(diǎn)，才能有針對(duì)性的解題。所以，在審題就成為了關(guān)鍵所在。

我們有的考生若自身學(xué)習(xí)能力較強(qiáng)，且有較強(qiáng)的綜合分析能力，那么在做題中自己不妨多總結(jié)，總結(jié)一些題型的特性及具體的解題方法。那么對(duì)于自身學(xué)習(xí)能力相對(duì)較弱的考生而言，建議大家聽一下紅師的地面或網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程，針對(duì)一些問題，我們會(huì)有一套完整的、系統(tǒng)的理論，幫助大家進(jìn)行梳理，針對(duì)解題中的一些常見問題給予解決。 三忌：主觀臆斷 在對(duì)一些學(xué)員的答疑過程中，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)很多學(xué)員在解題時(shí)總是臆想過度，脫離原文，無(wú)中生有。這是最不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)的失誤。大家一定要明確一點(diǎn)：軍隊(duì)文職考試考試中的任何題目的問題設(shè)置都是以原文為基礎(chǔ)的，千萬(wàn)不要因?yàn)橐恍┳哉J(rèn)為正確的常識(shí)而改變了題意。迷惑選項(xiàng)的設(shè)置往往與我們的慣性思維以及容易引起錯(cuò)誤猜測(cè)的因素有關(guān)。

深入鉆研真題，逐漸學(xué)會(huì)從題型、易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)、自己的失誤、耗費(fèi)時(shí)間等這幾個(gè)維度進(jìn)行統(tǒng)計(jì)。逐步培養(yǎng)我們自己的解析力。一旦形成對(duì)題目信息能夠進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)確分析的能力，這實(shí)際上也就意味著我們已經(jīng)從考生的思維逐步轉(zhuǎn)換為命題人的思維了。能夠做到這樣的分析，就會(huì)有意識(shí)的避免命題人設(shè)置的思維陷阱，從而最終能夠提高我們閱讀的速度和解題的正確率。 四忌：心理起伏 許多考生在備考的后期往往會(huì)產(chǎn)生心理起伏。伴隨著考試的不斷臨近，由于自己在復(fù)習(xí)中的一些問題也會(huì)產(chǎn)生心理浮躁。這種情緒對(duì)于我們科學(xué)備考以及最終入選有百害而無(wú)一利。所以在備考路上，要真正做到能坐得住冷板凳。不要因一時(shí)的急躁而導(dǎo)致前功盡棄。十年磨一劍，只要準(zhǔn)備充分，必將能夠蟾宮折桂。

曾經(jīng)有學(xué)員因?yàn)橐淮蔚目荚嚦煽?jī)不理想，問過我們考試研究中心的老師還需不需要再考。在這，大家首先要明確的一點(diǎn)是：如果你確定了自己的職業(yè)理想是做軍隊(duì)文職考試，那么一次的失敗并不說(shuō)明什么，千萬(wàn)不要一受挫就放棄。重要的是要總結(jié)失敗的原因，失敗是人生成功道路上的墊腳石。 當(dāng)考試結(jié)束后我們會(huì)在第一時(shí)間提供真題解析，在明確答案之后我們要對(duì)錯(cuò)誤進(jìn)行總結(jié)，不要看見考的不理想就不做這最重要的一項(xiàng)工作，總結(jié)錯(cuò)誤才能不斷進(jìn)步。在進(jìn)行總結(jié)的時(shí)候，我們要從以下幾個(gè)方面入手：一、錯(cuò)誤出在審題錯(cuò)誤還是錯(cuò)在選項(xiàng)閱讀錯(cuò)誤。二、選項(xiàng)設(shè)置是概念偷換還是片面表達(dá)。三、是不是錯(cuò)在引申過度。四、題目要求是選正確還是選錯(cuò)誤。只有做到對(duì)錯(cuò)誤心中有數(shù)才能有針對(duì)性的去避免，不會(huì)在同一個(gè)地方跌倒。

新疆紅師依托一流的教研團(tuán)隊(duì)會(huì)一如既往的為大家提供最專業(yè)的服務(wù)。

軍隊(duì)文職招聘崗位能力備考：言語(yǔ)理解切忌“丟三落四”

言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)是每年崗位能力中的必考題，備考軍隊(duì)文職考試的考生尤其需要注意，畢竟這算是其中的一個(gè)比較大的分類，如果沒有詳細(xì)的了解，那很有可能出現(xiàn)失誤的問題。紅師教育專家為考生整理了該知識(shí)點(diǎn)的解題技巧，希望幫助考生逐步克服各個(gè)知識(shí)點(diǎn)，取得成功。 在軍隊(duì)文職考試崗位能力考試中，言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)占據(jù)著非常重要的地位，這不僅是由于考試中題量大，還是由于言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)模塊對(duì)其他模塊起到的基礎(chǔ)性作用，更是因?yàn)橄鄬?duì)于其他模塊，該模塊是眾多考生都存在基礎(chǔ)，且基礎(chǔ)較為扎實(shí)的一個(gè)模塊，因此大家都把提分的希望放諸于此?？墒聦?shí)情況卻是，雖然大家都有基礎(chǔ)，但是做題過程中眾考生都存在這樣的狀況，那就是做題的時(shí)候自我感覺良好，核對(duì)答案時(shí)卻發(fā)現(xiàn)正確率并不理想。

我們對(duì)歷年題進(jìn)行了總結(jié)發(fā)現(xiàn)，在言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)中其實(shí)是存在一定的秘籍的，那就是不能丟三落四。 所謂三，指的是在言語(yǔ)理解與表達(dá)模塊中的三大核心詞，即：主體、感情傾向和語(yǔ)境。 主體，在言語(yǔ)中指的是文段論述的話題。在我們的考試中，片段閱讀有一個(gè)萬(wàn)能的檢驗(yàn)法則，那就是正確選項(xiàng)的主體必須與文段的主體保持一致，因此我們提出了主體排除法，即把選項(xiàng)中主體與文段主體不一致的選項(xiàng)排除掉。另外，此法常與選項(xiàng)差異法配合使用，所謂選項(xiàng)差異法，是指在主體滿足要求的前提下，辨析選項(xiàng)的主體屬性，與文段屬性一致的選項(xiàng)即為正確答案。既然主體如此的重要，在我們做題的過程中又該如何去尋找文段的主體呢?尋找主體常用方法有兩個(gè)，分別是尋找文段的高頻詞和主題句中的主體。